Dear Diary
In 28 Jul 1914
In the world war 1
CHAPTER ONE
Getting ready to leave
I started picking up some gear and my Back aches. I made some muffins And I picked them up I bring some sandwiches with eggs and bacon.A mag Some coffee And some bread.
CHAPTER two
On the ship
I walked onto the ship. Then I sit down on a seat. On the way there I see some people get sick. The puke bunched against my feet. It took as 5 days to get there.
CHAPTER 3
On the rowboat
I get off the ship and into a rowboat I start rowing to shore But I start hearing gunshots I see boats
start get holes in them And in some people start
Swimming to our boat asking for help.
CHAPTER 4
The front lines
I feel the blood thrown at my face. Then I get off into a rowboat. I start hearing gunfighters and people screaming. thin I see the Stretcher bearers run up to the screaming people. Then I shot a Turkish sniper in the head.
CHAPTER 5
wrong place
Bat then we found out that we was at the wrong place and then I got shot a Stretcher bearer pet me up I got carried me back to the ship. I woke up at the hospital and I went home with a stitch it Ended in 11 Nov 1918
Hi Alex,
ReplyDeleteNice Writing, It really is a nice story,
Keep up the great Learning, Joseph - St Pius X School
Hello there Alex,
ReplyDeleteGreat story, although there are a few spelling and punctuation errors. It makes me think of a book that I have only it's about world war two. Have you heard of a tool called Wir-Q?
from Thomas
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Deleteand no i have not heard Wir-Q
DeleteHi Alex
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post about World War 1. I like how you made a little diary entry about the war because you added different days and you explained a little about how it would be like. I remember when I had to learn about the war, it was really fun because we were able to make food and trenches and eat the food, We also had a water fight at the end which was really fun. As I was reading I saw a few spelling errors and punctuation that was missing, maybe you could fix that up. How did you feel when learning about World war 1?
i felt good to write it
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