Kia Ora Alex, I thought you would be fascinated by tanks Alex. Have actually seen a tank in person? Alex I have one helpful comment. I would find it easier to appreciate your writing if you used punctuation. Punctuation helps the reader understand you what you are saying. Ka kite ano
Kia Ora Alex,
ReplyDeleteI thought you would be fascinated by tanks Alex. Have actually seen a tank in person?
Alex I have one helpful comment. I would find it easier to appreciate your writing if you used punctuation. Punctuation helps the reader understand you what you are saying.
Ka kite ano
Kia Ora Miss B
ReplyDeleteThank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. I have never seen one in person but i no soo mach of them.
From Alex