Hi its Sophie from your class I like the way that you have added all those pictures of yourself and punctuation in the right place. you could work on making your words bigger so everybody would be able to read it. next time you could make sure that you read through before you put it on the internet. Well Done
Hi Alex, my name is Analei and I am a year 8 student at St. Pius X catholic School. I really enjoyed reading your book, I like the way you added pictures of yourself. Next time maybe make sure that you proofread it, but other than that nice work.
Hi its Sophie from your class I like the way that you have added all those pictures of yourself and punctuation in the right place. you could work on making your words bigger so everybody would be able to read it. next time you could make sure that you read through before you put it on the internet. Well Done
ReplyDeleteHi Alex, my name is Analei and I am a year 8 student at St. Pius X catholic School. I really enjoyed reading your book, I like the way you added pictures of yourself. Next time maybe make sure that you proofread it, but other than that nice work.
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nice book alex
ReplyDeletethanks James for the comment
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