In this situation I agree that the Great Walk should continue
and be made because the new walk will keep us fit and healthy.
Walking the truck or biking it can keep you fit and healthy.
You can do the track at your own pace and it can take up to 3
days walking to complete it.
and be made because the new walk will keep us fit and healthy.
Walking the truck or biking it can keep you fit and healthy.
You can do the track at your own pace and it can take up to 3
days walking to complete it.
First the track is a good place to go biking because of the nice
views on the walk. It is a great way to see the natural West
Coast. There are native plants and animals to look at.
views on the walk. It is a great way to see the natural West
Coast. There are native plants and animals to look at.
Secondly there is more business for locals. There is more
money for the local towns. People will be spending money in the
local Towns. There is more economy in the local towns.
money for the local towns. People will be spending money in the
local Towns. There is more economy in the local towns.
So in this conclusion I agree because it will keep us fit, the local
towns can get bigger and bigger.
towns can get bigger and bigger.
Ki Ora Alex,
ReplyDeleteTHe best thing about this piece of writing for me is the noticeable improvement in your spelling compared with anything else I have read from you. Well done!! Miss B
Hi Miss B
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