Monday 12 August 2019

Show Not Tell

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  1. Miss B (Principal)13 August 2019 at 21:12

    Hi Alex,
    You have made an effort to show rather than tell. Full marks for your effort. Alex a tip from me to ask you to please use spell check to help you make corrections. It is good manners to publish your writing for your readers with correct spelling. Cheers

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    1. Anonymous29 August 2019 at 09:30

      Hi miss B
      Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment I have just like at it and I see what you mean I will fix it soon.

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  2. Anonymous15 August 2019 at 09:38

    Hi Alex
    i like your writing im guessing the last one is frustrated?, but the thing is that there are no descriptions explaining what you are doing and i guess your spell check was not working, no hard feelings. - jorgen

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    1. Anonymous29 August 2019 at 09:47

      Hi jorgen
      Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment you got the last one wrong but thank you for your help on explaining that my spellcheck is not working

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