Hi Alex, You have made an effort to show rather than tell. Full marks for your effort. Alex a tip from me to ask you to please use spell check to help you make corrections. It is good manners to publish your writing for your readers with correct spelling. Cheers
Hi Alex i like your writing im guessing the last one is frustrated?, but the thing is that there are no descriptions explaining what you are doing and i guess your spell check was not working, no hard feelings. - jorgen
Hi jorgen Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment you got the last one wrong but thank you for your help on explaining that my spellcheck is not working
Hi Alex,
ReplyDeleteYou have made an effort to show rather than tell. Full marks for your effort. Alex a tip from me to ask you to please use spell check to help you make corrections. It is good manners to publish your writing for your readers with correct spelling. Cheers
Hi miss B
DeleteThank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment I have just like at it and I see what you mean I will fix it soon.
Hi Alex
ReplyDeletei like your writing im guessing the last one is frustrated?, but the thing is that there are no descriptions explaining what you are doing and i guess your spell check was not working, no hard feelings. - jorgen
Hi jorgen
DeleteThank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment you got the last one wrong but thank you for your help on explaining that my spellcheck is not working