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war journal

Dear Diary

In 28 Jul 1914

In the world war 1

CHAPTER ONE

Getting ready to leave

I started picking up some gear and my Back aches. I made some muffins And I picked them up I bring some sandwiches with eggs and bacon.A mag Some coffee And some bread.

CHAPTER two

On the ship

I walked onto the ship. Then I sit down on a seat. On the way there I see some people get sick. The puke bunched against my feet. It took as 5 days to get there.

CHAPTER 3

On the rowboat

I get off the ship and into a rowboat I start rowing to shore But I start hearing gunshots I see boats

start get holes in them And in some people start

Swimming to our boat asking for help.

CHAPTER 4

The front lines

I feel the blood thrown at my face. Then I get off into a rowboat. I start hearing gunfighters and people screaming. thin I see the Stretcher bearers run up to the screaming people. Then I shot a Turkish sniper in the head.

CHAPTER 5

wrong place

Bat then we found out that we was at the wrong place and then I got shot a Stretcher bearer pet me up I got carried me back to the ship. I  woke up at the hospital and I went home with a stitch it Ended in 11 Nov 1918

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Dave Dobbyn

Dave Dobbyn

Dave Dobbyn is a New Zealand singer/musician/songwriter and

record producer. He is 60 years old. Dave dobbyn has a

Rare Lifetime Achievement Award as part of the 2001.

He was a shy boy but he confident because he was with his school

friends So he formed Th’Dudes with his school friends in the

late ‘1970s-1980s.

After Th’Dudes speak up in 1980 Dobbyn started a pop group

DD Smash. The band first released their first song.

Dave Dobbyn is in Australia and he is celebrating because he

got a Rare Lifetime Achievement Award as part of the 2001.

Being 60 years old and winning a Rare Life Time Achievement award

in music has not stopped Dave Dobbyn. He will go down in New

Zealand and Australian Music history as the greatest singer in New Zealand and Australia

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